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January 20th, 2006, 08:58 PM
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"Matter of Honor" Discussion Thread
Please use this thread to discuss the story, "Matter of Honor".
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January 21st, 2006, 08:10 PM
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Snowball, My Angel Baby
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Well, I just had the pleasure of reading this story.
I could envision this as a two-part ep.
Nice job, Eric!
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Lay down
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The night is falling
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And dream of the ones who came before
They are calling
From across the distant shore .
Children are a message that we send
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January 21st, 2006, 08:55 PM
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Thank you very much, Pete!  in return.
If you see this as a two-part episode though, that does make me wonder how many parts you're going to be viewing Episode #4 by our own Senmut.
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"They hate us with every fiber of their being. We love....freedom, independence, the right to question. To them it is an alien way of living."-The non-myopic wisdom of Commander Adama, "Saga Of A Star World"
"How do you tell a Communist? Well, it's someone who reads Marx and Lenin. And how do you tell an anti-Communist? It's someone who understands Marx and Lenin."-Ronald Reagan
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January 21st, 2006, 09:09 PM
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Umm, I think I hear the coffee pot a-beckoning!
Seriously, there were too many action scenes to fit this into a 1-hour block. I might have to go back to review it but, I think a break point might have been possible during the first council meeting. Kudos to the treatment for Adama....Antipas had Adama right where Adama wanted him.
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Lay down
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The night is falling
You have come to journey's end
Sleep now
And dream of the ones who came before
They are calling
From across the distant shore .
Children are a message that we send
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January 21st, 2006, 09:25 PM
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Thanks! Sire Antipas is probably the one character I've created I felt that was most essential to address the complaint that Galactica too often had the Council members as buffoon type villains. Trying to come up with a formidable, serious adversary with youthful charisma was what I was looking for there. I keep thinking of Timothy Dalton in "The Lion In Winter" as the image of what Antipas would be.
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"They hate us with every fiber of their being. We love....freedom, independence, the right to question. To them it is an alien way of living."-The non-myopic wisdom of Commander Adama, "Saga Of A Star World"
"How do you tell a Communist? Well, it's someone who reads Marx and Lenin. And how do you tell an anti-Communist? It's someone who understands Marx and Lenin."-Ronald Reagan
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April 15th, 2006, 06:16 AM
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Nicely written, and well paced. I really felt for Apollo when his quiet, romantic evening with Sheba was spoilled. At least they got back together for the end!
Now we just have to watch out for that Councilor...
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April 15th, 2006, 02:57 PM
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Thanks, Raptor! Glad you enjoyed it.
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"They hate us with every fiber of their being. We love....freedom, independence, the right to question. To them it is an alien way of living."-The non-myopic wisdom of Commander Adama, "Saga Of A Star World"
"How do you tell a Communist? Well, it's someone who reads Marx and Lenin. And how do you tell an anti-Communist? It's someone who understands Marx and Lenin."-Ronald Reagan
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June 27th, 2006, 11:06 AM
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I don't know about a two parter, but the story would've made for a really strong hour long episode.
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June 27th, 2006, 02:04 PM
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Thanks! Yes, I envisioned it more as a low-key one hour type episode. It's not until we get to VS #4 ("Relics") that the budget-busting two-parters begin.
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"They hate us with every fiber of their being. We love....freedom, independence, the right to question. To them it is an alien way of living."-The non-myopic wisdom of Commander Adama, "Saga Of A Star World"
"How do you tell a Communist? Well, it's someone who reads Marx and Lenin. And how do you tell an anti-Communist? It's someone who understands Marx and Lenin."-Ronald Reagan
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August 4th, 2008, 10:23 PM
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Re: "Matter of Honor" Discussion Thread
I am glad I got to read "Matter of Honor" I must say it was pretty good.
Infact I can't wait to read the next one! Thanks for creating them and for sharing them with us all.
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August 5th, 2008, 10:04 AM
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Re: "Matter of Honor" Discussion Thread
EXCELLENT! |
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August 5th, 2008, 04:58 PM
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Re: "Matter of Honor" Discussion Thread
Much appreciated! I'll be making sure that more stories that have been finished get posted here soon.
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"They hate us with every fiber of their being. We love....freedom, independence, the right to question. To them it is an alien way of living."-The non-myopic wisdom of Commander Adama, "Saga Of A Star World"
"How do you tell a Communist? Well, it's someone who reads Marx and Lenin. And how do you tell an anti-Communist? It's someone who understands Marx and Lenin."-Ronald Reagan
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August 5th, 2008, 07:29 PM
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Re: "Matter of Honor" Discussion Thread
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Much appreciated! I'll be making sure that more stories that have been finished get posted here soon.
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Um, yeah, just knock on the doorbell or ring the door when you're ready!
Oh my, I'm so confoozed.
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Lay down
Your sweet and weary head
The night is falling
You have come to journey's end
Sleep now
And dream of the ones who came before
They are calling
From across the distant shore .
Children are a message that we send
to a time that we will never see.
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August 5th, 2008, 08:54 PM
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Re: "Matter of Honor" Discussion Thread
LOL, Episodes 9-12 are on their way to you!
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"They hate us with every fiber of their being. We love....freedom, independence, the right to question. To them it is an alien way of living."-The non-myopic wisdom of Commander Adama, "Saga Of A Star World"
"How do you tell a Communist? Well, it's someone who reads Marx and Lenin. And how do you tell an anti-Communist? It's someone who understands Marx and Lenin."-Ronald Reagan
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March 28th, 2009, 09:18 PM
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Re: "Matter of Honor" Discussion Thread
I just read this, and i agree with Eric's comment that its a low key 1 part episode. but its very good,and i can find no flaws it.
this would very easily work as a filmed episode as is.
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April 25th, 2009, 09:58 PM
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Re: "Matter of Honor" Discussion Thread
Many thanks Punisher!
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"They hate us with every fiber of their being. We love....freedom, independence, the right to question. To them it is an alien way of living."-The non-myopic wisdom of Commander Adama, "Saga Of A Star World"
"How do you tell a Communist? Well, it's someone who reads Marx and Lenin. And how do you tell an anti-Communist? It's someone who understands Marx and Lenin."-Ronald Reagan
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December 23rd, 2009, 12:00 AM
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Re: "Matter of Honor" Discussion Thread
We write better than 90% of TV folks do!
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Populos stultus viris indignas honores saepe dat. -Horace
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May 19th, 2010, 01:02 PM
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Re: "Matter of Honor" Discussion Thread
I can't open any of the PDF files for these first few episodes. 
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May 19th, 2010, 05:24 PM
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Snowball, My Angel Baby
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Re: "Matter of Honor" Discussion Thread
Vulpa II,
Sorry for the inconvenience. It appears that this is "fallout" from a server problem that we encountered, last week. I'll need to reload these files.
Thanks for letting us know.
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Lay down
Your sweet and weary head
The night is falling
You have come to journey's end
Sleep now
And dream of the ones who came before
They are calling
From across the distant shore .
Children are a message that we send
to a time that we will never see.
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May 20th, 2010, 04:12 PM
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Re: "Matter of Honor" Discussion Thread
We we'll be whating . |
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May 20th, 2010, 04:17 PM
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Re: "Matter of Honor" Discussion Thread
And we'll be waiting too! 
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May 20th, 2010, 05:59 PM
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Re: "Matter of Honor" Discussion Thread
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Yep that two . 
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October 5th, 2012, 09:34 PM
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Re: "Matter of Honor" Discussion Thread
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Originally Posted by Punisher454
I just read this, and i agree with Eric's comment that its a low key 1 part episode. but its very good,and i can find no flaws it.
this would very easily work as a filmed episode as is.
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Like most of what EP writes...this is ure the superior of anything one might have seen....elsewhere. (ahem..cough...cough....)
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Populos stultus viris indignas honores saepe dat. -Horace
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"You know the night before was a tough one when even the sound of the fizz hurts your head." -Mike Hammer.
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