My Continuation Script

RGrant · October 2nd, 2003, 07:44 AM

http://www.geocities.com/rgame3/bgscript.html

Here's my work-in-progress that'll probably not progress anymore, but at least it's 100 pages, which is 80 more than I was planning on. After continuing on past Act One, my goal was to hit 130 pages, which with the font size I used would equal the length of one night of Moore's mini. 130 pages equals slightly more than 90 minutes of screentime. As I started working on it again, it was suddenly impossible to finish it in that length. If this is ever finished, it would have to be a four-hour mini too.

If you already read Act One when I posted it last month, I took out the part about the Cylons bombing the Orion One colony and changed the name Phillips to Talbot.

dvo47p · October 3rd, 2003, 07:27 PM

Ray Grower loved it?

shiningstar · October 3rd, 2003, 08:01 PM

I loved it! Keep writing!

ravesholpulsar · October 4th, 2003, 11:59 PM

You're an excellent writer. You should finish it. Take your time but finish it.

Rich

LucianG · October 8th, 2003, 04:54 AM

Ray,

I finally finished reading it a couple of nights ago. Now, please keep going. I'm looking forward to the final result.

This goes to show what could have been (and still could be) possible if a FAN had been given the honor of writing a continuation. Instead of an honor, I think RDM viewed it as a task, a paycheck, and a potential legacy.

Lucian

chains · October 8th, 2003, 05:02 AM

pritty cool dood

dvo47p · October 8th, 2003, 01:08 PM

Cumquat

ojai22 · October 8th, 2003, 04:32 PM

Isn't that Kumquat?

amberstar · October 8th, 2003, 08:00 PM

That would have been a way to a proper continuation!
By the Lords you must finish when you find spare time. I loved reading the story, you write very well

Thanks
Amber

RGrant · October 9th, 2003, 07:43 AM

Thanks for reading, fellow fans and cumquats.

Titon · October 9th, 2003, 11:33 AM

Well Done!

Now THAT'S a story. You should mail this to Ron with the words *what a real script looks like*.

You have talent my friend.

While reading this i could actually see making this. I have all the ships to make a go of it in cgi.

RGrant · October 9th, 2003, 12:40 PM

Thanks, Titon. You get started on the CGI and I'll go find a couple of Hatch and Benedict look-alikes.

Titon · October 9th, 2003, 12:53 PM

Dawg · October 9th, 2003, 02:04 PM

I hadn't had a chance before today - but I spent work time reading that (and I'm already in trouble)! Ray, you MUST finish it!

Incredible!!

I am
Dawg