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April 7th, 2004, 02:45 PM
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Snowball, My Angel Baby
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Abduction - A True Story Discussion Thread
Please post your thoughts, regarding Abduction - A True Story, in this thread.
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Lay down
Your sweet and weary head
The night is falling
You have come to journey's end
Sleep now
And dream of the ones who came before
They are calling
From across the distant shore .
Children are a message that we send
to a time that we will never see.
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April 7th, 2004, 02:58 PM
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Snowball, My Angel Baby
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Muffit,
You REALLY had me going on this one. I was thinking something else, entirely. Good story!
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Lay down
Your sweet and weary head
The night is falling
You have come to journey's end
Sleep now
And dream of the ones who came before
They are calling
From across the distant shore .
Children are a message that we send
to a time that we will never see.
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April 7th, 2004, 03:13 PM
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Great Wise Guru
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Wonderful ending. Had me guessing the whole time.
Excellent read, as usual, Muffit!
I am
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April 7th, 2004, 08:26 PM
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Muff Daggy
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Thanks BST! Thanks Dawg! And thank you so much for reading! 
Affectionately,
Muffit
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April 7th, 2004, 08:28 PM
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Strike Leader
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I....uh.....must have missed something....
Where is this story at? I would like to make comment, but it would help if I could read it first.... 
Bryan
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April 7th, 2004, 08:34 PM
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Muff Daggy
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Originally Posted by Gemini1999
I....uh.....must have missed something....
Where is this story at? I would like to make comment, but it would help if I could read it first....
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Hi Gemini! It's right above this thread. Here's the link:
https://www.colonialfleets.com/forums...ead.php?t=6778
It's an attachment inside that post...
Thanks!
Muffit
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April 13th, 2004, 05:43 PM
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Originally Posted by BST
Please post your thoughts, regarding Abduction - A True Story, in this thread.
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Muffit you are soooooooooo talented! Keep writing Muffit!
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April 13th, 2004, 08:03 PM
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Muff Daggy
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Thank you so much Shiningstar
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April 18th, 2004, 09:11 PM
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Stablemaster, Livery Ship
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Muffit,
that was cool!
you are so visual, and multisensory! The cell bars....oh, my!
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November 6th, 2004, 04:08 AM
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Oh Muffit that was really cool
After reading these two sections I knew what "you" were and what you were describing.
"Through my periphery, I saw the bars on either side, and walls perhaps at head and feet. I was in a cell."
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"It was then I noticed it; a bizarre device suspended above me. Forming a circle at its perimeter, hung pale colored objects, of shapes I could not begin to understand. "
After working in the maternity ward I spent many hours thinking about the birthing process and the world of a baby and how they might perceive their surroundings the way you describe it is very much what I imagined.
The way you have structured this story reminds me of a short story I read in college called "The Lottery" by Shirley Jackson
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November 6th, 2004, 01:38 PM
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Muff Daggy
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Thanks Jewels!! Thanks Rowan!! And Rowan, I was hoping it would read like that.. kinda give ya clues and you might (or might not) guess the ending, kinda like a whodunnit.
Thank you all for reading!!!
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