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August 10th, 2004, 02:07 AM
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Muff Daggy
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Join Date: May 2001
Location: Beaver Hollow, TN
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The Human Cell
How apt it is we name our parts as cells. For in truth we find ourselves within one when without the courtesy of asking birth leaves us here. And though in desperate intimacy we strive to circumvent the walls like concertina briars that keep our hearts from freedom, we find in darkest evening hours the shroud that hides us hugging loneliness inside.
These shells that wrap our souls hide needs as well, like hermit crabs that shield their deepest wants from being held. The softest tissues forge our prison bars, and tears the tin cup cries we hide inside. Need like a warden drives us nourish well our private bastilles, as though to lose internment were a crime.
And if in happy neglect we find love anyway, another inmate’s glad to ridicule our momentary lack of melancholy, and make the fleeting hope set sail away. A spouse, a child, a toy, a show, mere camplight codon shadows dispelled by day.
If day’s sole longing effort is to illume the prison yard, then give me night’s false shroud and let me dream. A rainbow is not light that meets the eye; but Nature’s blush without the powdered shell.
Affectionately,
Muffit
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August 10th, 2004, 05:40 AM
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Very good Muffit....you always have great words!  |
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August 10th, 2004, 09:09 AM
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Strike Leader
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: Among the 13th tribe....
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 very moving Muffit!
My favorite musing yet.......
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August 10th, 2004, 11:06 AM
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Muff Daggy
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Thank you so much Julix and Amberstar  It is so wonderful to have friends like you...
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August 10th, 2004, 02:09 PM
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You are welcome my dear muffit |
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August 11th, 2004, 04:37 PM
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Colonial Story Teller
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Beautiful
((((((((((MUFFIT!)))))))))))
Can a brotha git a minit?
Muffit, beautiful prose as always, my dear friend. It is truly a blessing to know someone with as beautiful a heart and mind as yours.
Affectionately,
Martok2112
Dangit, where's that minit? 
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August 11th, 2004, 05:59 PM
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Originally Posted by martok2112
((((((((((MUFFIT!)))))))))))
Can a brotha git a minit?
Muffit, beautiful prose as always, my dear friend. It is truly a blessing to know someone with as beautiful a heart and mind as yours.
Affectionately,
Martok2112
Dangit, where's that minit?
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Here is a tissue Martok 
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August 11th, 2004, 06:43 PM
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Muff Daggy
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Thanks so much Martok! And equally to know someone like you who is so talented at writing stories! 
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August 11th, 2004, 07:28 PM
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Colonial Story Teller
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LOL! So much love in the house of Muffit.
Thank you, Julix. And Muffit.
Feeling better now,
Martok2112
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August 11th, 2004, 08:29 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2003
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August 11th, 2004, 11:22 PM
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Muff Daggy
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Many thanks to you dear 14th |
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August 11th, 2004, 11:35 PM
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August 11th, 2004, 11:39 PM
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Join Date: Mar 2003
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Muffit, you are incredible at this. Did you try publishing the words that you write???
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August 12th, 2004, 03:48 AM
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Join Date: Mar 2002
Location: Cheesehead in Connecticut
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you tug at heartstrings!
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Cheese: [has tinfoil on his teeth] I have braces!
Mac: You found that on the ground, didn't you?
Cheese: Garbage can.
-episode "Mac Daddy"Foster's Home for Imaginary Friends"
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August 12th, 2004, 11:00 AM
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Muff Daggy
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Originally Posted by Archangel
Muffit, you are incredible at this. Did you try publishing the words that you write???
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Thank you so much Archangel and Bsg Nope, never tried publishing or anything, just sharing with my wonderful friends...
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